So, after sending a few fellow cdubIIIers my old old poems (Brandon, Niall, and Ave Maria) I got very few critiques on them. I think they've been around so long that they are kind of stuck to what they've always been. I still like them and if any amazing ideas come to me about any of them before May, I'll definitely keep editing them. As for last month's poems: I made the short one a little more clear. I really enjoy it, even though it doesn't have a point. And Dark still needs work, but I added some stuff and changed some stuff. That will be my big editing project for April. If you've got any suggestions, throw them out, por favor.
As for new poems, I have the one that I wrote for the team piece for the decathislam about Human Trafficking. And I have a poem about Ikea being death.
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